Recent content by verbatimine

That sounds very interesting. Curious if Montreal has something like that.

Hello everybody. It was my first attempt of my own post here and I am not sure what to do if I want to post another poem? Should I do it here? or should I create a separate post? Thanks.

It is a good point. I will do my best no repeating myself. Giving praise is easy with copy pasta, but detrimental to the writer's art.:)

I want to thank everybody for considering my effort. I have not expected to get such thoughtful and detailed feedback and for that I am truly grateful. I am humbled by the fact that there are so many intellectual people here willing to guide me with honest opinions. This will motivate me to work...

I am glad you liked it. I will definitely take into account your feedback about the flow. I am still learning how to connect things together, how to lead from one chapter to another properly. Will be revisiting this piece in a month or two to edit (once it is not as fresh in my mind).

Thanks for the feedback. I am glad I have decided to share it here, and yes I was not comfortable sharing it in any other place :rolleyes:

Thanks for the feedback. Did you feel as it came off crass? I don't do drugs other then limited amount of alcohol, so not sure how it could come off this way. (I guess I need to read and write more in order to get better overall). In regards to the circumstances: all I can say is that it is a...

Actively pursuing the art of writing. I love writing about sex, relationships and internal conflicts that try to rip us apart. Love life. Have a great respect for women. Persistently seek to overwhelm them with the pleasures of orgasms. While staying true to myself in this quest.

Hello everybody, Hope you all are having a good 2023. I have recently started writing poetry and I am enjoying doing it very much. The challenge at the moment is to get people to be open about it and to be willing to read it and comment on it as my poetry often is very sexual. I was wondering...